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Sparda
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 |  Subject: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not???  Sun Jun 15, 2008 7:56 am | |
| Knock on the door
Foremole Din : "Yes come in?"
Sparda : "Hi boss. You wanted to see me?"
F.D. - "Yes Sparda. Sit down. As you know we all watched House Of Pain. But one thing you all didnt knew. There were also hidden cameras. I will not say how you got out, but i will say that you cheated. So i just dont have any other choises as make you the last person who got out of House of Pain. So thats mean your expanded from EUW."
Sparda - "WHAT?"
Wildcat - "No way."
F.D. - "Im sorry Sparda but at the end of the show you must leave your locker room empty."
Sparda stands up and before leaving he looks at Foremole Din and says - "Believe me. This is not the end of Sparda in EUW." Then he slams door.
Wildcat - "Can you believe it? Sparda - Oficial Bodyguard of Foremole Din."
Joe "Airplaine" - "Yeah i know. Just think about it. If Foremole Din got so easy rid of Sparda, then can we all feel safe about our jobs here?"
Wildcat - "Maybe Fred Starr will get final interview with Sparda to hear what he have left to say.Ok but here comes next fight."
So the whole idea is that after time i will come back with STYLE  As i said that EUW had not got rid of Sparda so easily.
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 1:29 pm | |
| sounds awesome! it goes great with all of the current storylines with the house of pain going on. this is just a little revision of the minor errors i saw as well as just some little additions that i think would help:
As Foremole Din is sitting as his desk, there is a knock on the door...
Foremole Din : "Yes come in?"
Sparda : "Hi boss. You wanted to see me?"
F.D. - "Yes Sparda. Sit down. As you know we all watched House Of Pain. But one thing you all didnt know. There were also hidden cameras. I will not say how you got out, but i will say that you cheated. So i just dont have any other choises but to make you the last person who got out of House of Pain. So that means you're suspended/expelled/kicked out from EUW."
Sparda - "WHAT?"
Wildcat - "No way."
F.D. - "Im sorry Sparda but at the end of the show you must leave your locker room empty."
Sparda stands up and before leaving he looks at Foremole Din and says - "Believe me. This is not the end of Sparda in EUW." Then he slams door.
Wildcat - "Can you believe it? Sparda - Oficial Bodyguard of Foremole Din."
Joe "Airplaine" - "Yeah i know. Just think about it. If Foremole Din got rid of Sparda so easily, then how save are our own jobs?"
Wildcat - "Maybe Fred Starr will get final interview with Sparda to hear what he have left to say. Ok but here comes next fight."
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Sparda
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 1:50 pm | |
| Thanks Dark Knight... My writing is not SO good
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Big Z
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:12 pm | |
| Nice work! Both Sparda and dark knight!! 
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Bam-Bam
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:01 pm | |
| | nice work, finally someone took advantage of the HoP Loophole I left |
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 7:58 pm | |
| | oh, it was already good. i just tried to help. i'm glad you don't mind. |
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Sparda
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:06 pm | |
| No no... im happy about your help if u need mine just ask
TNX everybody... Bam - Bam i just wanted to get expanded because i have exams and also to come back with style... maybe as someones mystery tag team partner or for something else so as i saw that i didnt got out of HoP so i thought about this idea
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lelex8
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:55 pm | |
| What we gonnna do with our feud
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Sparda
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:01 am | |
| Well maybe after my expand you get too cocky... so when i will return, you will be the first that i "will kick ass"
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Mon Jun 16, 2008 7:27 pm | |
| um, i think you're looking for a different word from "expand". you see, expand means "to get bigger," or "to spread out." so i think you're talking about an expulsion, or to expel, or to suspend. 
and i think i will take you up on your offer about your help. i have a storyline "dark knight and seltor feud." the first part is written, but we want to continue it in the future so if you have any super awesome ideas from that genius mind that brought forth this storyline you have now then i would be so grateful for your comments! thnx! |
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lelex8
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:17 pm | |
| | Sparda wrote: | | Well maybe after my expand you get too cocky... so when i will return, you will be the first that i "will kick ass" |
I can say that you were afraid of me then you got out of th fed
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Sparda
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| | Subject: Re: The End of Sparda - Or maybe Not??? Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:55 pm | |
| | so that is that you get so cocky just say bad things about me |
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